Friday 2 September 2011

She's so fortunate....

I don't think of what she has
Yet I think she's so fortunate
to have you with her...

I don't think she's been loved as me
Yet I think she's so fortunate
to have you got completely.....

I don't think she'll ever understand you
Yet I think she's so fortunate
that you understand her well.....

I don't think she'll be loved forever
Yet I think she's so fortunate
that she's loved for the moment........

I don't think she cares for what I go through everyday
Yet I think she's so fortunate
that you are there to tell her-
I don't matter to you...

9 comments:

  1. I liked this one...this kinda tells me of a person whose in love with another person who is in love with another....!!!
    she desires his love but he doesn't reciprocates and loves another girl.Hence the girl who speaks feels how lucky is the other girl..!!! even if she has the love momentary the important thing is she does have it...!!

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  2. sahil...you got it absolutely right...its about a girl whose man has moved on but yet she cant really get over him...whatever time she spent with him..she cherishes it ..there is pain but there was once some love in the past ...

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  3. no one has escaped this type of insecurity in his/her life....the intellectual ones resort to poems while the commoner goes the devd way.

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  4. anir..only you could have given such an introspective analysis to this poem....hahaha

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  5. hi maam... beautiful this one is..you can see her sitting totally sad when she would have written the poem. the tang of bitter sweet emotions can be felt in the words

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  6. thanks swati..if you can picturise her then my job is half done..thx fr the support..keep following..

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  7. mam u r really making me cry....seems like u have digged deep in my heart n gave beautiful words to my sad feelings....really mam....love this poem...love u

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