Sunday 25 September 2011

The Mistaken Identity II

He told me to hold on,
He tells me to let go...

He created a bridge,
He creates a barrier....

He waited with me for next life,
He loosens his reigns on me....

He struggled with pain,
He makes me insane...

He looked  into my eyes,
He gazes into the distant.....

He was an open book,
He is a secret diary....

He cupped my face with love,
He stays away from me....

Was it truly love?
Or was I too in love
with love??


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12 comments:

  1. drishty keswani25 September 2011 at 09:28

    :D :)

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  2. Anonymous25 September 2011 at 10:13

    very beautiful mam :)

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  3. Charu25 September 2011 at 10:42

    to be in love with love :)

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  4. Unknown25 September 2011 at 11:11

    he loves you like crazy
    where reason seems hazy.

    he will not wait for you till the next life
    make you his one and only loving wife.

    I know i suck at poetry
    yet i will continue to surprise you with such effrontery.

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  5. Smita Sharma Dabas25 September 2011 at 11:48

    haha...hehehe
    anir,you are quite a poet
    though a little novice;))

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  6. Unknown25 September 2011 at 11:57

    well mam, you are kind enough to label my pathetic attempt as novice....never got bitten by the poetry bug, though love to read one :)

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  7. Sahil25 September 2011 at 12:26

    great mam...just great...!!! what a fickle minded lover is this guy...!!!

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  8. Smita Sharma Dabas26 September 2011 at 02:45

    being fickle minded is also such a constant quality...

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  9. zoya26 September 2011 at 03:20

    loved the poem.. beautifully written but why only he is at the decisive end... what about you and your emotions.. dont they matter?

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  10. Smita Sharma Dabas26 September 2011 at 03:28

    its gr88 that you loved the poem zoya...this life has a cyclic quality to it,some people love you more than you love them and there are are some whom you love more...it can't really balance out...cause if it would then this would be a perfect world...

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  11. Radhika Gupta26 September 2011 at 07:41

    i really like the way every two lines conflict...

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  12. twinkle26 September 2011 at 10:48

    awwww mam u r a real poetess....love ur poetry especially these kinds...its so cute...loved the last two lines....

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