He blocked her out to loneliness .
He shunned her to abyssal nothingness .
He loved her ,he wanted her.
Why then the acknowledgement
of his love
seemed a sin to him??
Had he not noticed the
same feelings in her
eyes??
Was it the apple:
the fruit of knowledge..
the lost innocence
of Eve burdened
with the original sin
Or it was the hope
of transcendental love
going to the dungeons?
Now that Adam saw her
as a woman,
Now that he waited
to love her the way
he had always wanted:
why then the guilt
of losing out on
The Garden Of Eden?
He did'nt know ,
He didn't realize ,
what he wanted
was natural,
what he desired
was destined.
Their names were to create
history ,the story
of first love
that gave rise
to humanity.
Why then the guilt??
They were to create
what they had to create
in God's decree
as He sees everything but waits.
He shunned her to abyssal nothingness .
He loved her ,he wanted her.
Why then the acknowledgement
of his love
seemed a sin to him??
Had he not noticed the
same feelings in her
eyes??
Was it the apple:
the fruit of knowledge..
the lost innocence
of Eve burdened
with the original sin
Or it was the hope
of transcendental love
going to the dungeons?
Now that Adam saw her
as a woman,
Now that he waited
to love her the way
he had always wanted:
why then the guilt
of losing out on
The Garden Of Eden?
He did'nt know ,
He didn't realize ,
what he wanted
was natural,
what he desired
was destined.
Their names were to create
history ,the story
of first love
that gave rise
to humanity.
Why then the guilt??
They were to create
what they had to create
in God's decree
as He sees everything but waits.
Guilt yes it was
ReplyDeleteGuilt because humanity lost its innocence
Guilt because desires became insatiable
Guilt because human mind got pregnant with jealousy
Yes forbidden fruit opened eyes but at what price?
The lost equilibrium at Eden… is it comparable with present day skyscrapers
Built by the toil and toll resulting from human compulsion?
Could human mind gift itself the peace that flowed freely in Eden?
Who is to blame? God who transferred one of his attributes to the couple?
The attribute that granted them the ability to make a choice.
And what choice did they make? Who says they committed sin?
They only disobeyed their creator; sin was the repercussion of that ignorance
Observance of love without prudence leads to destruction,
It loses its purity and weaves an opaque web of indifference towards responsibility
Love is beautiful if it’s balanced and a curse if diluted
If Eve serves her sentence so does Adam. Man preferred power over blessings and lost his soul in the process.
Rest, they say is history.
wow...what an analysis with a completely different perspective.
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