Friday, 16 September 2011

Ecstasy

Touch of the breeze ,
Zephyr at its best ,
dark ,gloomy sky
opens a new world .

The heat is past ,
sweating trauma vanished.

There pours a cloud  his heart ,
drenching me with
unknown ecstasy
unexplored emotions
in unison with
the music within me !!
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10 comments:

  1. Smita Sharma Dabas16 September 2011 at 10:14

    Again an old poem when I was alone and solitary(not lonely)and just enjoyed the music of the lovely Delhi rains .

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  2. Sahil16 September 2011 at 10:25

    too good mam...!!! too good..!!
    I am just waiting for ur book to be published..!! :)

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  3. Smita Sharma Dabas16 September 2011 at 10:30

    but i think u would have to wait till I have almost more than 100...that's my target.

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  4. drishty keswani16 September 2011 at 10:55

    veryy nyc ma'm :)

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  5. Rishabh Chauhan16 September 2011 at 11:10

    Its awesome mam ... really sahil was right dat u should published it !!!!!!



    Via iPhone

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  6. Anonymous16 September 2011 at 11:16

    reading such poetry always gives a joy and a thrilling sensation :D

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  7. Radhika Gupta16 September 2011 at 22:20

    i think i have read this before... was it published in some edition of sagarika??

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  8. Charu17 September 2011 at 00:03

    simply beautiful..!

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  9. Smita Sharma Dabas21 September 2011 at 00:24

    Yes radhika..kudos to your memory...I did give this long time back for sagarika...

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  10. twinkle21 September 2011 at 08:42

    nice poem mam...

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